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1. 
   Atul Pandit said:
   January 13th, 2008 on 12:43 pm

   Excellent! You sent me in my childhood when I read this Kavita. Thanks for this. It is requirement of ur site to have such type of thing.

2. 
   Atul bhai said:
   January 13th, 2008 on 12:47 pm

   This is one of the most favourite poem of all.

3. 
   Rishi said:
   January 21st, 2008 on 1:45 am

   Reminds me of all the poems I read back then. And this was indeed one of the best poems, along with Subhadra Kumari Chauhan’s “Mera Naya Bachpan”. These are the best lines in that poem:
   ——-
   ‘माँ ओ’ कहकर बुला रही थी मिट्टी खाकर आयी थी।
   कुछ मुँह में कुछ लिये हाथ में मुझे खिलाने लायी थी॥

   पुलक रहे थे अंग, दृगों में कौतुहल था छलक रहा।
   मुँह पर थी आह्लाद-लालिमा विजय-गर्व था झलक रहा॥

   मैंने पूछा ‘यह क्या लायी?’ बोल उठी वह ‘माँ, काओ’।
   हुआ प्रफुल्लित हृदय खुशी से मैंने कहा – ‘तुम्हीं खाओ’॥
   ———-

   I really relish my days, and am stunned by the poet.
   _
   Rishi

4. fryol.net | Poetry said:
   January 21st, 2008 on 1:56 am

   [...] reading through Abhinav’s blog and was delighted to read Pushp ki Abhilasha. Reminded me of one another great poem which makes much more sense to me now “Mera Naya [...]

5. 
   Sanchi said:
   March 9th, 2008 on 11:39 am

   Thanks! I needed this poem urgently for school!

6. 
   afsana said:
   August 23rd, 2008 on 11:57 am

   abhilasha…ek aisi chahat hai jisko pane ki tmnna to sabhi karte hai pr milta usi ko hai jiske dil me afsana ho….kyoki mai afsana hu

7. 
   Rishi said:
   August 26th, 2008 on 5:23 pm

   Main bachpan ko bula rahi thi bol uthi bitiya meri,
   Nandan van si phool uthi yeh chhoti si kutiya meri.

8. 
   roshan said:
   June 20th, 2009 on 12:19 pm

   yoon to makhan lal chaturvedi ji ka bhi koi javab nahi lekin mujhe afsana ka comments achchha laga

9. 
   gaurav said:
   July 24th, 2009 on 9:26 pm

   चाह नहीं मै सुरबाला के
   गहनों में गुंथा जाऊं
   चाह नहीं प्रेमी माला मे
   बिंध , प्यारी को ललचओं

   चाह नहीं सम्राटों के
   शव पर , हे हरी डाला जाऊं
   चाह नहीं देवों के सर पर
   चधों , भाग्य पर इतराऊँ

   मुझे तोड़ लेना बनमाली ,
   उस पथ पर तुम देना फेंक
   मात्र भूमि पैर शीश चढ़ने ,
   जिस पथ जाएँ वीर अनेक

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